irrelevant-detail-killer

Cuts cinematic details that don't serve the main point. The opposite move from vividness. Vividness adds sensory detail; this skill removes detail that's vivid but distracts from the argument. Use when a narrative paragraph has impressive sensory texture (sounds, colors, weather, mechanics of an unrelated scene) that the reader has to push past to get to the point. Triggers on "eliminate irrelevant detail," "tighten…